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“Hawk!” the Herald Angels Sing

by Lionel E. Deimel

 

“Hawk!” the herald angels sing;

“Watch those raptors on the wing!”

 

“Peace on earth,” the angels cry,

Struggling hard to rule the sky.

 

Joy they bring to those below

While great birds dart to and fro.

 

“Angels, guard your wings and face

As you sing of heav’ly grace.”

 

“Scorn those birds,” the angels sing,

“Hear our words from heaven’s King!”

 

Angel with hawk

 

Ideas often spring from multiple influences. The day after Thanksgiving 2012, I was stalking eagles, hawks, and waterfowl in the Montezuma National Wildlife Refuge. At the same time, my church choir was preparing music for Advent and Christmas. Somehow, these activities inspired the verse above, which is intended to be sung to the familiar Mendelssohn tune for “Hark! the herald angels sing.”

For what it’s worth, “Hark! the herald angels sing” was originally penned by the prolific hymnist Charles Wesley, though his version began “Hark, how all the welkin rings, / Glory to the King of Kings!” Wesley associate George Whitefield is responsible for changing that into the opening we have come to know.

My parody was written on December 4, 2012 and slightly revised on September 11, 2013. On December 6, 2025, following a service of carols and secular Christmas songs, I decided to revisit the poem. As originally written, the last stanza merely repeated the first. Realizing that I could craft a replacement that made an additional contribution to the overall imagery, I composed the final stanza shown above. I also made changes to quotation marks to clarify what is dialogue among angels and words addressed to observers below. I also made minor changes to facilitate singing the words comfortably to the traditional Mendelssohn tune.

— LED, 1/24/2013, rev. 12/6/2025

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