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The Walk to School

by Lionel E. Deimel

 

Until high school, I walked to school every day:

A block and a half to stairs leading to the Southern Railway right-of-way.

I crossed one track, walking along the other for a short distance,

Facing the usual direction of oncoming traffic.

Leaving the rails behind, I descended to a bridge over the canal that paralleled the railroad

Before following the sidewalks that led to my school.

 

I never saw a freight train in the morning,

But a train sometimes blocked my way going home in the afternoon.

Other kids dashed across the track ahead of an approaching train

Or ducked under a car or couplers between stopped cars.

I waited patiently, standing on the ballast and reading reporting marks on the railcars.

 

In the morning, if I were early (or maybe if I were late),

I would have to wait for the limited to pass on the northbound track.

As it passed the semaphore a hundred yards or so ahead,

The signal’s blade moved from vertical to horizontal,

And the aspect changed from green to red.

 

One day, the limited approached faster than I anticipated,

Rapidly gaining speed from its downtown terminal.

I was caught just a few feet from the track on the edge of the embankment.

The green and white locomotive with its gold trim roared past,

Followed by coaches whose stainless-steel fluted sides reflected the morning sun.

I was buffeted by wind and noise as wheels rolled across the rail joints.

I could have reached out and touched the train,

And was scared that I was close enough to do that.

In an instant, the observation car, with its lighted green and white drum, flashed by,

The end of the train disappearing past the semaphore announcing an occupied block ahead.

I crossed both tracks and the bridge over the canal as usual

But was forever changed.

 

 

This poem is obviously biographical. For years, I walked to school over the Southern Railway tracks and a bridge spanning the Peoples Avenue Canal. I actually had my choice of two bridges over the canal, although I usually used the one closest to the wooden steps at the foot of Tecumseh Street. My last trip over the route described in the poem would have been in 1961.

The limited of the poem was The Southerner, a New Orleans to New York streamliner that debuted in 1941. It left the Southern terminal on Canal Street at 8:00 am. It was an impressive train from the outside. I never got to see the interior.

I have not been back to my old neighborhood in decades. I can see from Google Maps, however, that the stairs to the railroad right-of-way and the bridges over the canal are gone. The semaphore is gone as well. The Southerner also is no more, and the double-track mainline is now part of Norfolk Southern Railway.

The idea for this poem came to me as I was lying in bed 1/15/2024. I had been reading a book of poems received as a Christmas present at the time. I wrote out a first draft on the pad and pencil I keep on my nightstand. Various edits were made when I created this page the following morning.

As I was preparing to read the poem at an upcoming open-mic event, I made numerous small changes to the text, mostly to clarify the events described.

— LED, 1/16/2024, rev. 1/17/2024

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